I was very impressed by this piece. You organized it well, and you communicated both the husband and the wife’s character in a believable way. The first time I was concerned the husband character gave up a bit too easily, but then the second time, I realized he didn’t want to listen to her idle threats of abandoning him, so he give in just to shut her up. It made sense to me.
December 14, 2007 at 12:23 pm
I was very impressed by this piece. You organized it well, and you communicated both the husband and the wife’s character in a believable way. The first time I was concerned the husband character gave up a bit too easily, but then the second time, I realized he didn’t want to listen to her idle threats of abandoning him, so he give in just to shut her up. It made sense to me.
December 17, 2007 at 12:26 am
Thank you!
December 17, 2007 at 12:29 am
Anyway,it was me and my brother who talked in this dialogue.I didn’t do it on the day itself.Haha.